PALE RAMON

[titch thomas]

Another track on a slightly different tip -- a bit more playful, maybe. As always, comments are appreciated and helpful.

 

https://soundcloud.com/titch-thomas/pale-ramon

 

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[dingformung]

I like the spooky background melody

The drums although sound a little bit too old school for me and could need some tweaking but all in all some solid acid :)

[peace 7]

This has a lot of nice things going on-- unfortunately, personally (obviously), I feel the acid adds nothing to the track.  Like if I edit out the acid lines and listen to this track, it's quite good.  I do feel that when the acid comes in, is definitely when some major thematic element would come in, but it's not this acid...  Maybe something like this: