Brendan Rincon - Sketch29_b

[Guest brendyman]

I've been trying to squeeze an idea out of my head for the past week and I'm finally getting somewhere.

 

https://soundcloud.com/brendyman/sketch29_a

 

It's still very much a work in progress, but any feedback is appreciated!

[DorkingtonPugsly]

Wow I really enjoyed this. Really nice work!

Only negative I see is that I think the mixing could be a little better, gets muddy at certain parts and feel that some of the sounds could be clearer.

But yeah really cool. I love this. :>

[Guest brendyman]

Wow I really enjoyed this. Really nice work!

Only negative I see is that I think the mixing could be a little better, gets muddy at certain parts and feel that some of the sounds could be clearer.

But yeah really cool. I love this. :>

Thanks for taking the time to listen! Muddiness always seems to be my problem but I don't really know how to fix it. Any tips?

[Squee]

Even though it's not my kind of music, I still like it :)

I was kind of surprised by the vocal samples and to begin with I didn't like them but they quickly grew on me.

 

Man, I can't think of anything I would change about this tune... I like it just the way it is :)

[Guest brendyman]

https://soundcloud.com/brendyman/sketch29_c

 

I made it a little longer and added some stuff!

[Doomczar]

I really like the additions in _c, could you develop the ideas even further? You took nothing away by extending it, it didn't feel repetitive at all. I really enjoyed the space created at 1:44, and the melody at 2:22 is very compelling.

 

The song is a bit muddy, but it kind of suits the mood in my opinion!

 

I have had some success with filtering off the extra high and low frequencies from every sound. This can make things sound "fake," if too much of the frequency is removed.

I really enjoyed it, especially _c.

[Squee]

https://soundcloud.com/brendyman/sketch29_c

 

I made it a little longer and added some stuff!

 

Dig it! I didn't think the track needed to be longer, but you proved me wrong. I like the new version :)

[DorkingtonPugsly]

Yeah man the new versions great! Sounds clearer too. Enjoying this a lot thanks~

I'd like a way to download it though so I can listen to it in the car during my commute.

[Npoess]

I've been trying to squeeze an idea out of my head for the past week and I'm finally getting somewhere.

 

https://soundcloud.com/brendyman/sketch29_a

 

Nice vibes to this.

 

Really like the vocals.

[cruising for burgers]

top notch, really envy how you're perfectly capable of mixing kick and snare on the same time without making it sound bad/distorted. thumbs up. however, don't know what's happening with me today, i'm missing some funky basses on every track i listen to, same with this one. that is all.