ryancolecreate Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 Hi guys, I'm new to WATMM and I wanted to drop a couple of tracks on you as an introduction. These are not my latest pieces, but they are fairly recent. Like them or not, I am interested in feed back. Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag Homage to Those Who Travel Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag Enveloped Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag Outsourced The parent Url is my portfolio site too if you are interested in graphic design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryancolecreate Posted September 8, 2007 Author Share Posted September 8, 2007 speak lurkers! Speak! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pylonbitch Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 rules. read them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryancolecreate Posted September 8, 2007 Author Share Posted September 8, 2007 regarding what? Are those links considered 'blind'? If so why are they a part of the "tips" section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryancolecreate Posted September 8, 2007 Author Share Posted September 8, 2007 Hi guys, I'm new to WATMM and I wanted to drop a couple of tracks on you as an introduction. These are not my latest pieces, but they are fairly recent. Like them or not, I am interested in feed back. Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://www.tellmesomethingnice.com/music/songs/homage.mp3 Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://www.tellmesomethingnice.com/music/songs/enveloped.mp3 Your browser does not support the HTML5 audio tag http://www.tellmesomethingnice.com/music/songs/outsource.mp3 Better?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sisforawesome Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 nice melodies. i especially like the first track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest monotoo Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 rules. read them. that's just watmm fingering your ass so they'll know you better, your links were fine. outsourced kept me warm late in the lonely night of thumbnails, it flows like a nice long train ride. ps nice work on the new site! when did you get that new layout up?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryancolecreate Posted September 8, 2007 Author Share Posted September 8, 2007 ha I did that last semester. Byproduct of webdesign. :D (my avatar is flash too. poke it! Hehe) Thanks for the kind words! I need to get my feet back under me. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest tht! tne Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 homage: kinda reminds me of the orb meets boards of canada. nice. enveloped: nice progression. maybe the beat could come in sooner. outscoure: good. did not appeal to my sense of frantic rhythm but good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryancolecreate Posted September 8, 2007 Author Share Posted September 8, 2007 thx killa! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyr_Nova Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 Very bubbly music. If there were a soundtrack to my days at the playground as a wee peanut, this would be it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubba69 Posted September 8, 2007 Share Posted September 8, 2007 I really liked enveloped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryancolecreate Posted September 9, 2007 Author Share Posted September 9, 2007 thx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCM Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 good tunes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brian trageskin Posted September 9, 2007 Share Posted September 9, 2007 Enveloped is ace mate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
springymajig Posted September 10, 2007 Share Posted September 10, 2007 Enveloped - Reminds me of Orbital's later stuff EXCEPT it's actually really good! I agree with tht! tne, the beat should probably come in earlier. Also I think this could probably be a little bit longer... but then again, too short is often better than too long. Homage to Those Who Travel - VERY cool samples! They're really well arranged and mixed... the texture and rhythm they create is really cool. The overall atmosphere of this song is great too.. awesome! Outsource - This is pretty sweet too... but nothing about it in particular really stood out to me... nice and relaxing though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AugmaticDisport Posted September 10, 2007 Share Posted September 10, 2007 Homage to Those Who Travel is real nice. I like some of your design stuff, too. That steel book is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryancolecreate Posted September 10, 2007 Author Share Posted September 10, 2007 Ha thanks! I'm surprised someone looked at it. HHHmmmm.... I might go back to that enveloped track and bring the beat in a bit earlier. Although I sort of like how it is a little off balance and leaves you really wanting it but the time it drops. I want people to be pushed by that tension. Homage is very inspired by The Books. If you dont know them find them and study children. They are masters at what they do. No queston. Outsourced is just a Krush-esque beat intended for an MC. Nothing big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaffa Posted September 10, 2007 Share Posted September 10, 2007 This is really great stuff man, the melody on 'enveloped' is really nice. Great developement and flow , and also stella choice of sounds, you use alot of whirry droney sounds that I tend to like. Jolly playful moods. 'Outsourced' is a different type of tone, more downbeat and reflective, good headphone tune Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AugmaticDisport Posted September 10, 2007 Share Posted September 10, 2007 Yah i was going to say it had a definite Books vibe to it. Great band. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryancolecreate Posted September 11, 2007 Author Share Posted September 11, 2007 they is my digital Jesus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rook Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 yea the beat should definitely come in earlier on enveloped. I really liked it thinking it would just be without beats, but when the beat came in, i wished that it had come in earlier so it would be for longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Rook Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 outsource is quality downtempo. But didnt really seem too special. Don't be afraid to have something really stand out. Wasn't too crazy about the vocal pads. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest yan_g Posted September 15, 2007 Share Posted September 15, 2007 enveloped: pleasant listen, too short. it ends where it's supposed to kick in for real. homage: pleasant listen too, beautiful sounds. where do the voices come from? outsource: started nicely but i really didn't like the tweaked-filter synth (nor the voice pads btw) and it seemed like lacking of something to me. beautiful background sounds tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dale Posted September 15, 2007 Share Posted September 15, 2007 my favourite was enveloped. how long have you been making music just out of curiosity? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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